Status: In Progress
Summary:
An ancient evil from the days of old is nearing his return. The ancient gods must now rely on 6 college students in order to save the world.
Created: August 19, 2013 | Updated: September 1, 2013
Genre : Mythology
Language : English
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You set up your story pretty well. I liked the intro where you explained all the Egyptian mythology since I would have had no clue otherwise. One thing to watch for is using the wrong word (ie nationally rather than nationality). Those little things won't get picked up by spell check but end up making a reader focus on that little mistake more than what's being said. Just a suggestion. Otherwise, this was a very clean, edited piece and I'll be watching for the next chapter.August 22, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
