Status: In Progress
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Created: December 28, 2013 | Updated: December 28, 2013
Genre : Supernatural
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
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With only the first two chapters done, I can't say too much. The premise is pretty good and the two main characters have potential. Some of the dialogue is kind of awkward though. It would be cool if you wrote more then I could have a better idea of what's going on.
January 11, 2014 | Dave Robertson
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I really enjoyed reading your story. I particularly liked the characterization you used. I think the books/stories I have liked best are due to the characters, and your characters are great.
January 12, 2014 | S S Desai