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Zabel Seishimugen



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  • Joined 10/05/13
  • Last login 04/16/18
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  • A Midsummer Lullaby

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    I must say, this tale captures the inner child within me as I read this tale. It's not everyday I read a story worthy of joining the archives of the Golden Age of Tales. May your legacy fly far.

    Reviewed on: March 10, 2014

  • Helena Hawthorn - Russian Roulette

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    The chapters I've read so far are quite intriquing. The only problem I have with the story is the order of the paragraphs. To illustrate my meaning, imagine oil and water. They don't mix together since they both possess different qualities. It should be the same with the majority of paragraphs. They should give a detailed description of a subject, a single subject's speech (or parts of their side of the conversations), or the subject's individual actions; not a mixture of two or more characters' actions, speeches, and so forth unless they are simotaneously working together in an activity, such as pushing a rock together. Besides that, nothing. Other than the paragraphs, everything else is prettty good. I'll give this a "two thumbs torching up" for a good job.

    Reviewed on: March 10, 2014

  • The Somewhat Amazing Life of Fergus Duddletrouf

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    For those who wish to enjoy a rather relatively fine "tall tale" filled with heroes with rusty spoons, dwarves with a sense of romantism, and a somewhat miffed scribe, read this now.

    Reviewed on: February 20, 2014

Comments

  • Death Panther

    I must confess, your form of literary writing, unusual as it may be, creates a sense of excitement within me as the girl metamorphosizes from the average mortal and into a demonic beast from some unknown world. Have you ever considered creating a universe for her or the entity sleeps within her (Note: not certain if some unknown mystical entity possesses her or if she herself is said entity). In any case, keep up the good work.

    Commented on: February 25, 2014

  • Tim the Troll

    This story possesses a rather refreshing narrative: simple explanations with numerous clear details. Keep up the good work.

    Commented on: February 20, 2014

  • A Dance to Remember

    You breathed life into this story in a way that I desire to write! Could you assist me by any chance in editing my story, Chaos Champions Chronicles? I would sincerely appreciate it. Chaos Champions, corrode the Corruption!

    Commented on: February 13, 2014

  • A Craving for Humanity

    This was a rather interesting story to read. Keep up the good work. 

    Commented on: February 13, 2014