Sparkatale

>Haha. The Twister is a conman. "Conman" is such an ugly word. I'm sure Paul would greatly prefer the term "social engineer." ;) Glad you enjoyed it! I hope you like the rest of the chapters too...

Well, I'm sorry if you don't find that style of narration appealing. I've already got a lot of the story written, and Paul's narrative voice is pretty consistent throughout. The basic idea is that even when it's not dialogue, he's still talking. Some things have been toned down a little as the story goes on, though. I'm glad that you liked the rest of it. Hopefully you'll keep reading and enjoy the Twists of the plot. :)