Sparkatale

HIA. 

I have just finished reading the fourth chapter of this work, and I must say it has captivated my interest. Your backstory is quite intriguing, and I like the way the seperate  countries are developed from the Shattering. 

The first three chapters were amazing, in my mind, but the fourth seemed just a tiny bit rushed. When it opened to Ekaitz sparring with the other one, Darik, I kind of expected more from that scene, but then we rushed straight into the next thing. 

That may just be how you write, and aside from that little bit I found the rest of the chapter very enjoyable, just a few little spelling mistakes here and there, and I hope you continue this story so I can see what happens next. 

Cheerio, Rairb