Feeling, a Fantasy poem | SparkaTale

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Feeling

By: Yin Harmony

Created: December 21, 2016 | Updated: January 19, 2017

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

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Floating, Dancing

Giggling, laughing

Joy!

" I love you."

I want to talk more.

Smile more.

i want to tell everyone

but

I can't.

this will always be a special day

You're perfect to me.

I love you too.

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  • Dave Robertson

    Good so far. It's refreshing to read a story that doesn't contain a ton of grammatical errors. The story has promise, though a little more foreshadowing of what the story will be about would have drawn me in more. All in all, I think it's a solid start and look forward to more chapters.

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    November 21, 2013 Flag


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