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Feedback exchange

This is an opportunity for undiscovered writers of for writers who need a valid opinion about their stories to get some spotlight. Review on!

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Feedback exchange!

Feel free to leave your stories here to be discovered! I'll go first: My story's called Smoke and Mirrors. Summary: It is a time of dragons scorching the sky line. In Thebbington Abbey, Ember Blackthorne earns her living as a thief. When she crosses paths with both a humble, kind jeweler's son and a wicked, irresistible pirate, she learns that the world often catches fire and legends often beat reality. I'll offer feedback in exchange, of course.

by diane sky | May 20th 2016, 06:32


  • I like stories about dragons too! (Hence my profile pic with two dragons and a sword) xD

    ​Smoke and Mirrors sound so irresistibly interesting! 

    In exchange, I want a review on my story "ID (Purpose)" or "Worlds Apart"

    Summary for ID (Purpose): They left without him. Amnesia caused his crime. Unknown on the reason of stealing money from the grocery store and diagnosed with Paraplegia, Robin Delahaye faces numerous obstacles to escape from the police and seek help from his friends. Can our beloved tactician flee from AJRA and fly to freedom together with his friends?

    Summary for Worlds Apart: Robin never imagined he'd spend Christmas Eve trapped in an airport waiting for his girlfriend to come home. Reflet never imagined she'd spend Christmas Eve trapped in an airport with a hot foreign stranger she has no chance with.

    Reviews, faviourites, and comments are appreciated! (I'll do the same thing in return) :D 

     

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    Robin Ward | May 21, 2016