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The Contract

By: andy holberry

Status: Completed

Summary:

Bad day?...

Trouble at work, home...with life?...

When offered a choice do you take it no matter the cost?...

Be careful what you wish for...you may just get more than you bargained for.

Created: August 9, 2013 | Updated: September 1, 2013

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

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  • D.M. Gergen

    I'm giving this 4 stars since the writing is wonderful, the tone is that grimy, dark, and captivating, but the problem is that it's only a chapter long. One chapter that leaves open a lot of questions for what happens next. I would have loved for this to have gone on further and been a full-length novella or even novel. Or maybe even a story following another character in a similar situation. Is there anyway to be redeemed? This was very good, but could be great if it was continued.

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