You must, a Romance story | SparkaTale

Sparkatale

You must

By: Angelada A.

Status: Completed

Summary:

Loving me is a terrible idea. Because I- weak, cowardice, selfish- can only do so much to stop the damage, you must heed this warning. You must.

Created: October 16, 2013 | Updated: October 16, 2013

Genre : Romance

Language : English

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      Very nicely done. I found it refreshing that the only 'plot' in this story is the writing that's there for the reader to see. I've read numerous stories of authors who exhaust themselves with world-building and trying oh-so-hard to come up with numerous scenarios and disasters ( I count myself as one of those unfortunately)  but your work reads like letters from one person to another. There's no need for any outside interference and it's all the better for that. Are they a series of letters from one person to another? I liked what I read, would be interested to see if there would be any more chapters added.

      December 8, 2014 | Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant)


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      ~Oh, this is such a good read! I really love it and the detail is amazing! 

      February 17, 2015 | Cassidy M.