Status: In Progress
Summary:
CiCi's best friend is frightened of nearly everything. He's been in love with her for nearly four years, realizing it a couple years after they met, and couldn't do anything about it until one of CiCi's creative writing reports gives him the courage...
Created: September 26, 2013 | Updated: September 26, 2013
Genre : Romance
Language : English
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| 1: | Meeting Derik | 1952 |
| 2: | Honest and Timid | 857 |
| 3: | Wow | 1037 |
| 4: | Last to Know | 1537 |
| 5: | Anger | 658 |
| 6: | Date | 1786 |
| 7: | Oblivion | 743 |
| 8: | Worth | 1184 |
| Total Wordcount: | 9754 |
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This is cute, but there are a few places in every chapter where it seems you either forgot a word or used the wrong one. Nothing major, but I thought I would let you know if you wanted to edit. I also wouldn't mind a little more happy time between the couple. I get Derik has a horrible past and part of this story i the memories, but it seems like any of the time they spend together in the present is very much focused on negative emotions rather than the happy emotions of a relationship. I hope as you continue this story there will be some more happy things happening.September 28, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
