Status: In Progress
Summary:
I've always wanted to do one of these. A group of girls travel deep within their world to not only find out what makes it tick but also find out why the corrupt government is sorting power how they see fit. In this world, people need their steam power, but the pipes are being rerouted, and it's up to Yfryte, Rosso, Juul, and Nyumi to figure out why the pipes are moving.
Created: September 30, 2019 | Updated: November 21, 2019
Genre : Adventure
Language : English
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| 1: | Introduction | 143 |
| 2: | Yfryte | 175 |
| Total Wordcount: | 318 |
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I liked this introduction to the story, especially where Yfryte stands out as a yellow dot in the masses. It's an interesting theme, steam-punk. Especially with copper everywhere. It'll be interesting to see where the story goes!October 7, 2019 | Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant)
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Thanks. I'll be trying to find some time between work to work on this some more.
October 8, 2019 | Leah Soto
