Status: Completed
Summary:
There is always a choice, to follow your moral code to the end or accept that some things must be done for the greater good.
This is a short story of a scientist solder who chose the second option, and faced the consequences.
Created: September 17, 2013 | Updated: September 17, 2013
Genre : Supernatural
Language : English
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Clean writing for the most part and the essence of a very short piece. Trustworthy Traitor did one thing very well and that was the description of Hyde's confusion.
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This was pretty good. One place I was slightly confused was where he had a young girls neck in his hands? I will admit to not reading the classic so perhaps this is from that, but if its not I would maybe give a little more or reword that section a bit just so it's a little more clear as to what happened.
October 9, 2013 | D.M. Gergen