The Rush Hour, a Horror story | SparkaTale

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The Rush Hour

By: The Dragonlord

Status: Completed

Summary:

If you've ever travelled an underground railway system, this one is for you......especially if you commute on the Underground in London.......

Created: September 2, 2013 | Updated: September 2, 2013

Genre : Horror

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 1

Favorites: 1

Reads: 268


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Total Wordcount: 1905

Reviews (1)


  • D.M. Gergen

    A well written piece that really embodies the horrible claustrophobia I get in subways. A few minor editing things that stood out enough to slow the pacing of the story down at one point or another, but otherwise a very enjoyable quick read.

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    Again, very well written as your other pieces on here. A few minor editing things in terms of the spacing between paragraphs not being uniform throughout the piece and three paragraphs in a row starting with your characters name. Otherwise very well done.

    September 2, 2013 | D.M. Gergen