The Day on The Express, a Mystery story | SparkaTale


The Day on The Express

By: Leaf Soto

Status: Completed


I woke up one regular morning. I get to the train station at my normal time of 6:45 a.m. just like any other normal day on my way to work. The next thing I know is people are screaming, saying someone's been killed. Now they're saying no one get's off and that this train will not stop, until the killer is found. They are looking at me. My name is Skylar Gates and I am not a murderer.

Created: March 23, 2015 | Updated: April 22, 2015

Genre : Mystery

Language : English

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      Very good job, Leaf! The suspense built with each five to ten minute segment, and I could feel the tension as if I were aboard the train. I don't want to give away the ending to anyone, but it was superb, I smiled and said "nice job, great finish!" aloud. This certainly proves that you are a dynamic writer that can tackle a multitude of genres, on top of your fantastic art work!

      May 8, 2015 | Ryan Funk