Insignificant, a General story | SparkaTale

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Insignificant

By: Timmie Tots

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Hello I'm insignificant, I'm not going to tell you my name because its not important. I'm not important and the sooner you understand that the better. I wish I could say this derived from bullying or neglect. But no. Through my time growing up I just I came to this decision and since then I've lived my life like that.

Created: August 20, 2013 | Updated: September 4, 2013

Genre : General

Language : English

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      This was really good. It was well written and a story that will hit close to home with lots of people. I really liked it. Please keep it up :)

      August 21, 2013 | Terryn Lewis


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      Thank you very much and I will :)

      August 21, 2013 | Timmie Tots


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      You have a lot of great things going with this. It actually wasn't what I was expecting, though that's a good thing. The only real suggestion I have is to maybe read it aloud one time since there are a few spots here or there that don't flow as smoothly as the rest of the story. Obviously none of us catch everything with proof reading, but that's probably the only thing I noticed. Otherwise this was delightfully unexpected :)

      August 21, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      Thank you very much. Could you let me know where exactly so I can improve it please? Thanks again

      August 21, 2013 | Timmie Tots