The Tall Man, a Horror story | SparkaTale

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The Tall Man

By: Becky Kirk

Status: Completed

Summary:

Primrose is the next victim for the Tall Man.

Created: August 14, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013

Genre : Horror

Language : English

Reviews: 2 | Rating:

Comments: 5

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Reads: 273


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1: Chapter One 1047
Total Wordcount: 1047

Reviews (2)


  • D.M. Gergen

    While good writing, this is not a very original piece. Becky Kirk definitely has talent with her words, though, and the read was enjoyable even though it seemed like fan fiction.

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    September 2, 2013 Flag


  • F.D. Charles

    I think this a great short story, and i think it gives a template to writers who want to write a scary short story :3. Even though it was a story, i have to say it sure did give me the creeps.

    Rating:
    September 2, 2013 Flag


Comments / Critiques


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    Nothing different to my review, but one thing i could add is keep writing :).

    September 2, 2013 | F.D. Charles


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    I read this after the great review you received and had to admit that I was a little disappointed that you didn't make this more original. Granted, it's not exactly like the movie, but I was expecting something completely different that was your own creation. You write well, but you need to be careful that you're not crossing boundaries with copyrights. If this is meant to be a fanfiction I would label it as such in your summary. Other than that, I would also suggest making a few sentences out of that long one in your first paragraph.

    September 2, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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    There's a film??? This just came to me in a nightmare after i read about Slender, though it wasn't as graphic! And as scary!

    September 2, 2013 | Becky Kirk


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    OK THAT IS NUTS. I truly thought you had seen the movie...seriously it's called Tall Man. Check it out. I'll change your review then to reflect that since the main negative was not giving credit to that work...

    September 3, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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    Yeah I will do. But i'm not big on Horrors, I do write them because well i'm a little weird and I've been having weird dreams of late which are scary to me. Is it scary? Because i'm ready Dracula at the mo and i find it really disturbing, that's why i don't read or watch horrors.

    September 3, 2013 | Becky Kirk