Status: Completed
Summary:
A little adventure on a pretty island becomes something entirely sinister.
Created: August 29, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013
Genre : Mystery
Language : English
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A good story that is a quick and entertaining read. Gadget Gurl did a very nice job of giving her short story just enough detail to make her world vivid without bogging down the natural pace of the piece.
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October 9, 2013 Flag
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I read this before and am not sure why I didn't comment. There were no gross errors in this piece and the story moved along well. It was never dull and didn't feel too short, which I find is a common thing with single-chapter short stories on this site. Well done.
October 9, 2013 | D.M. Gergen