Omar Scriven | SparkaTale

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  • Joined 09/30/13
  • Last login 11/16/14
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I am an abnormal normal I guess. before you start saying there is no normal, there is. it just varies depending on location. time of day, temperature, and coordinates work the same way

 

anyways... I just want to learn to write longer chapters >.< !

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  • The Lay of Paul Twister

    I think the thing turned out really well on the whole. it could use some editing just to make it a smoother read(it's hard to tell sometimes what kind of narration you have going on or what you're referencing with the cultural stuff) but I was constantly looking forward to what came next so I hope to read more of this and any other works you write in the near future.

    Commented on: November 3, 2013

  • The Lay of Paul Twister

    I want moar! not much else to say other than make sure to read my post in your thread on the forum.

    Commented on: October 2, 2013

  • Paper Puzzle Pride

    a good read. a real feeling bit of a moment that almost everyone has which makes it easy to relate. I don't really have any solid critique but keep up the good work!

    Commented on: September 30, 2013