Sparkatale

This is great! You're obviously sitll in the process of editing, as there are a few hiccups throughout the chapters I have read, but as a whole, the plot lines are enough to entice me to continue reading. Good job, Xavier!

You have bled me dry, Xavier. 

I wish you a life full of pain and suffering.

Farewell. 

A monster?

Everyday as you lay your head at night, you will think of me. 

You will reminisce the days I loved you.

The nights I gave you my heart. 

But it is your heart I am after now, Xavier. 

The monster you so claim to have become will be laying there, waiting for you to come home. 

And when you think I have come back to you, when you think I have come to love you once again, I will kill you.

This way, Xavier, I will be the last you ever love.  

-- The End, Richard

 

I do not fear you. 

I've learned to defend myself, Xavier. 

All those nights you were out, sleeping around the town with those goddamn cows, I have taken karate. 

I've learned how to split woods, and cut boards with my hands, Xavier. 

Come at me with your knife, I'll be ready. 

I loved you not long ago, Xavier.

But you have pushed me to great lengths. 

YOU will rue the day. 

--Gone, Richard

Were you not there the nights I cried myself to sleep?

Can you not forgive me for the sins I have committed? It was a mere comment on your exterior, which in no way reflects your tender heart. Do you truly think I cannot handle you? Do you truly think I do not know you?

Xavier, you were my everything. 

I believe in you, Xavier. 

I trust you. 

-- I'm drifting away, Richard. 

What exactly have I tarnished, Xavier? What is this honour you speak of? 

Where was this honour as you carelessly struck your hand upon my face, Xavier?

All I did was love, but that wasn't enough. 

Nothing was ever enough. 

I'm sorry I hurt you. 

I'm sorry.

--Richard

For the love of all things good, Xavier. 

Do you honestly think you'll be able to hurt me? You loved me once, as I you. 

Move on. 

Find someone, Xavier. 

Xavier, I want what's best for you.

-- Richard