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You know, for a self proclaimed writer, I should really be better at these things. What's there to know... hm, well I'm from Pennsylvania, and I'm always looking for constructive criticism. I would love to hear your opinions!
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Rating:My that was enjoyable. Very humorous with a nice dash of undertone. I like how you protray the aliens as curious. It really shows a different side of the sci fi genre that is always fun to look at.
Reviewed on: April 14, 2014
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Thanks for bringing my mistakes to my attention. I've never been especially good at editing, but I'll try and clean it up a bit as soon as I can. Thanks for the feedback as well!
Commented on: April 17, 2014
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This is definitely interesting (the creepy intro was a very nice touch), though I might suggest a little bit of work on your formatting. You've done a nice job portraying your characters as well. Over all, very nice start.
Commented on: March 23, 2014