Sparkatale

First of all, yes it is a retelling of Alice in Wonderland but in my own weird and unique twist. It will have it's fair share of dark and kind of gorey scenes, though, that's what I like about stories. Not to mention there will be love, humor, and most importantly action. So I'm thankful that you like it. Thanks again :)

You're fine. I'm a bit behind on mine as well, I have got school kicking in. Thanks a lot though for reading my story thus far. 

Lol yeah, I understand so at the moment I'm actually redoing this chapter XD. Besides that thanks. The next two or more chapters will be up soon. :3

Thanks. Yeah, I know, I need to figure it out, and I'm not the best editor. I'm going to edit back after I do 10 chapters.

Aw bye. It's been great having you review my book. Thanks again!

lol its fine :3 Thanks though. I'm not telling you how she got crazy. You actually won't know until the last book of the series XD

Thank you! I work really hard into making this story enjoyable for those who like a good book. You flatter me! XD I'm not even done with this book yet and you think its going to be in Barnes and Noble, thanks for the huge compliment. :3

Lol, I've been known to over describe things, being too descriptive and I'm trying my hardest not to do so. It's very hard for me. Anyways, I'm going to do some editing when I get to the tenth chapter so I can revise. XD Thanks again for finding the errors, I'm not an editor so it is great that someone can help me out.

You are correct! My story is a spin-off of Alice in Wonderland. It's my favorite story in the world XD. I love to twist and change things and this was the perfect story to start off with. Thank you so much!

No problem. I highly enjoy it. I hope you have as much enjoyment in mine as I am in yours. :)

Thank you, I take my pride into creating my characters with their own personalities. Also I tend to take description to the max, which I am currently working on. I'm not that great at grammar, so it would mean a lot to me, if you could help me out. Thanks again. I love your book so far. I'm going to complete it before righting my comment. P.S. I love your name and I am using it on a different story XD.

Thank you so much for your advice. I am perfectly fine with you reading a chapter a day. I am happy that an author like you is reading my book. Your book is absolutely enthralling. I love it! Still reading it at the moment. So i will comment when I'm done. Thanks again!