Created: December 21, 2016 | Updated: January 19, 2017
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
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Floating, Dancing
Giggling, laughing
Joy!
" I love you."
I want to talk more.
Smile more.
i want to tell everyone
but
I can't.
this will always be a special day
You're perfect to me.
I love you too.
Reviews (1)
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Good so far. It's refreshing to read a story that doesn't contain a ton of grammatical errors. The story has promise, though a little more foreshadowing of what the story will be about would have drawn me in more. All in all, I think it's a solid start and look forward to more chapters.
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November 21, 2013 Flag
