Created: May 11, 2015 | Updated: May 11, 2015
Genre : Romance
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
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It draws me towards you
Pulls me through
I feel your hands holding tightly
Keeping me beside you
If you leave me
We will only become closer
You’ll see
You cannot be rid of me
I am the opposing force
The force that draws you to me
Like magnets, we cannot part
Although we can be miles separated
Our souls are forever destined to be together
We may not talk
Or even see each other’s faces
But you are here with me
And I am there with you
A strong attractive power
Your charm draws me
Gives me a strange sense of security
Even at the times when you hate me
That’s magnetism
Undefined as I see it
But describing perfectly our relationship
Reviews (1)
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Good writing for a student in 9th grade, but some things to clean up to match what I assume is a slightly more mature author at this point. It's a short read so worth a look by other readers.
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October 8, 2013 Flag
