Created: November 14, 2014 | Updated: November 14, 2014
Genre : General
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
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Does anyone remember the shy girl
The girl that was to scared
To scared to show the ligh within
The light that was dieing inside
Does anyone remember how she creid
Cried becuase n one would listen
Listen to her pain and suffering
Suffering that is no long forgotten
Does anyone remember how she smiled
The smile that wa dieing for love
Love that has now been found
A light that can never die again
Light so bright hat everyone looks
Looks and now remember her
The shy girl tht now shines
Shines more than they ever will know
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I will admit that I don't know much about monologues, if they're suppose to follow a specific format or are free to do what they want, but there were a few structural things that at times made it hard to follow what was going on. The beginning and the end of this is good, but the middle is slightly confusing due to there being no background for the character. For being a short piece I think Hernandez did a decent job, but I finished reading this piece unsure of what I was suppose to take away from it as a reader.
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September 11, 2013 Flag
