Pain of love, a Romance poem | SparkaTale

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Pain of love

By: Lyla Koresh

Created: August 1, 2014 | Updated: August 1, 2014

Genre : Romance

Language : English

Reviews: 2 | Rating:

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My heart burns and beats,

With a passion for the poison

That everyone calls love.

When will this ever cease?

This burning inside my chest,

Seems to never stop.

I feel like giving up

Every time I see you.

Each time you are near,

I want to tear out your heart

And set it on fire

So you will know the pain you caused me.

Reviews (2)


  • debbie bisson

    Oh i can relate to your pain and passion! unrequited love sucks!

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    August 18, 2014 Flag


  • D.M. Gergen

    There were a few errors that kept this from getting five stars, but if you want to read a VERY good story this is one. From the narration of a child with OCD symptoms to parents trying to live normal lives with those children, it was probably one of the best things I have read. Then follow it up withe closing line...just brilliant. This is one of my favorite things I have probably read on this site thus far.

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    October 8, 2013 Flag


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