Who, a General poem | SparkaTale

Sparkatale

Created: July 25, 2014 | Updated: July 25, 2014

Genre : General

Language : English

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~~Feelings were made to be tampered with, to be tested, to be felt.
Thoughts were a way of defense, the voice of reason that doesn’t always follow through.
A person is only human, a tee shirt tied to a clothes line, flesh.
Whether you can sense what’s behind closed doors depends what’s in you.

 

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  • D.M. Gergen

    Though the writing was clean and the story was interesting, it was really hard to get into due to it being written like someone just retelling you what happened in a movie. I understand that this was a film that the author had made, but it would have been more enjoyable to read if it had been edited to mimic a written story moreso than a movie synopsis.

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    September 2, 2013 Flag


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