Created: July 24, 2014 | Updated: July 24, 2014
Genre : General
Language : English
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My Father by Tony Cline
There was a man
Who lived alone
When all sudden
Married the woman
He loved
He asked the woman
"Would you marry me?"
She said, "I do."
After she said, "I do,"
They held their wedding
Some years later
They had a son
And called him Tony
A year later they had a daughter
And called her Sara
At age four
Tony was a witness
To a murder
He would never forget.
And at age sixteen
Tony finally gives in
To his father
About
Being a star witness
In a murder
About
A
Deputy sheriff's
Whose
Life
Was shortened
And who
Left
Behind a
Daughter.
And
Twelve years later
The deputy sheriff's
Murder
Was finally solved
Thanks to
The sheriff's son
Tony Cline.
Reviews (1)
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A well written piece that really embodies the horrible claustrophobia I get in subways. A few minor editing things that stood out enough to slow the pacing of the story down at one point or another, but otherwise a very enjoyable quick read.
Rating:
September 2, 2013 Flag
