Created: July 12, 2014 | Updated: July 12, 2014
Genre : General
Language : English
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The Learning Spark
I stand surrounded by shadows.
Shrouded in mystery and in magic.
The world was full of wonder, full of magic
Then I heard a question.
“What is darkness?”
I turned to see a boy standing before me,
Eyes full of light,
Sparks of joy and naivety.
I answered and he was sated.
Then he asked again,
“What is light?”
I answered and he was sated.
The boy continued to ask questions,
Every time I would answer,
And always be sated…
Always temporarily…
Then I decided to ask him a question,
The boy with eyes of light and joy.
“Why do you ask questions?”
The boy smiled.
“Why would I live in a world shrouded?”
“Wouldn’t you want to live in a world illuminated?”
I was sated by his answer.
But then I realized. My world was shrouded.
I asked the boy another question,
He answered and I was sated.
“Why do you ask me so many questions?”
“Why ask when I know so little?”
The boy smiled.
“No one knows everything.”
“But everyone knows something different.”
“So I ask. I ask. I ask.”
For a second I paused.
Then I was sated.
The boy then turned to another direction.
He asked the darkness a question.
I listened and wondered who he spoke to.
I asked and he answered.
Then I saw who he spoke too,
A man with a furrowed brow and deep creases on his face,
-But I disliked this man-
-The questions he answered instead of me-
-I forgot the man-
-And the shroud increased-
-Then I felt it-
-A burrow in my chest-
-Shame-
I asked the boy about my shame,
And he smiled.
“It’s okay to live in a shrouded world.”
“A world of mystery and magic.”
“Some worlds are better in the light”
“Some worlds are better in the shroud.”
I paused as I realized something.
The boy…
The boy…
He was no boy, he was a man.
A child’s naivety is not asking questions.
A child’s naivety is accepting without thought.
A wise man asks questions with naivety…
But wonders about the answer….
To ask and to question the answer
This is wisdom.
-The boy-
!No!
-The man-
I may not have his light or his joy.
I envy it
The Learning Spark
Reviews (1)
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This short piece clearly shows love during terrible loss. Lucatri Vanche really is able to break through the emotions of a suicide of a lover despite the short length. There were a few grammar points to edit and a part or two to smooth over, but overall it was a very good piece.
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August 31, 2013 Flag