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Dream

By: A'dia Norine

Created: April 24, 2014 | Updated: April 24, 2014

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

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..*..

Dancing on air,

A welcoming fair,

Walking into abyss,

Escaping from bliss,

Suspense comes nevermore,

As a shadow lurks in its lore.

..*..

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  • D.M. Gergen

    A different twist on something like The Seventh Seal. The story could use a little more detail in areas and fixing of a few minor errors, but overall a decent short story.

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    October 9, 2013 Flag


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