Sparkatale

Hello everybody! I am looking for some readers to give me some feed back on my story Created, Not Born. I have only just started it but I have the first few chapters planned out, hopefully I should get a new chapters every fortnight or so. Anyway, any reviews/comments would be greatly appreciated and returned in kind. Here's the summary. He wasn't human, that much he knew. You couldn't possibly be counted as a part of the human race when you were never 'born'. His womb had been a cold, white laboratory, hidden underground. His father, a equally cold man with no interest in him other then to prick his skin with multiple needles and God knew what else. His mother? Well, he supposed that title would have to go to the one person who had ever really shown him any kindness. Silenna, but, she was dead so... In his heart of hearts he knew exactly what he was, what he had been created for, "I am a weapon. Nothing more, nothing less."