Sparkatale

Hi there, I am going to post the first chapter of my story Marked Book 1: A Darker Power soon and was wondering if anybody would be interested in reading it, I would be quite happy to read yours in return. It may take me a couple little while to update as I'm still proof reading/ editing but, anyway, here's the summary: Once, this realms knew peace. The five nations lived together in harmony, the ancient kings all working together for harmony under the great gods. But now everything has changed. Vallin and Aldarian are forever at war, have been for almost six and a half centuries. The Aldarians erected the Borders to protect themselves, great walls of stone filled with able men, Bordermen, to defend them. But rumors are spreading, Vallin is amassing an army, one made of Dragon Speakers and their mounts, Elementals, Mages and even Elvenkind. It seems all hope is lost. However, unknown to both the Vallinians and the Aldarians, to the entire realm. One was born in the lands of Xlan, one with the ability to end this war once and for all. Afraid of this power and its consiquences he fled to the Borders once of age and has hidden there for years. Now as the final, decisive action falls into place he must decide, will he save this realms? Or let or plunge into chaos? This is the journey of the Marked