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Hello (to whoever may be reading this). I was wondering if you could maybe read a few of the chapters on my book Falling. I'm a new author and am looking for some feedback regarding my work. I would like to know if the pacing thus far is good or if it too fast or slow or if the plot is a bit mixed up, and etc. Thanks for your time. Sincerely, Aurora

by Aurora Quinn | Nov 21st 2014, 20:12


  • I've read quickly the first chapter just to see if it is of my liking and I think I can give you a couple of suggestion: if you don't mind waiting a couple of days (got guestes at home), I'll give it a more thoroughly​ reading and review.

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    Rose D. | November 23, 2014


  • Yes, thank you so much! I've been waiting for a second opinion for a while now and I'm happy to finally have someone to critique me. Thank you for your time and have a great time with those guests! :)

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    Aurora Quinn | November 23, 2014


  • Sorry if it took me so long, but I've just posted my first review about your story: I hope my feedbacks are usefull!

    ​I would appreciate if you could do the same for my story "Podestaria", whenever you have a bit of time.

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    Rose D. | December 12, 2014


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