Sparkatale

I am currently in the progress of my story, "Travix Man: Rise of Dark Trevo (Saga One)". I am in progress of writing the fifth chapter now. I would like a review for my story of any kind. Whether it is from positive reviews, negative reviews, favorite part of the story, grammar issues, vocabulary, etc. I need anything that could help me become a better writer, for I feel like I am lacking come criteria for my writing skills. Thank you for your time!