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Critique the first two chapters of my book? Please?

Hey! I just posted the first two chapter of my fantasy book, it's called The Great Daze Chambers. I would really appreciate some feedback if anyone has the time. :)

by DayDreamer Extraordinaire | Feb 9th 2014, 09:13


  • Sure! If you would check out my stories, too, I would be super grateful!

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    Kobayashi Kyoko | February 9, 2014


  • Thanks for replying! I would love to read some of your stories, it's only fair if you're willing to read mine. :)

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    DayDreamer Extraordinaire | February 9, 2014


  • I'll do a trade with you! Welcome to the site, by the way. ~

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    A . Nonymous | February 9, 2014


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