Sparkatale

My story Quinn's Duty. Is written in a teenage boys point of view. More than a review or comment. I would prefer a PM message giving your thoughts about weather or not my character sounds like a guy. And how to change things to make it more "Manly" If possible I looking for some one who will help me not only with my first chapters but all the chapters I post in the future. So basically I am asking for a PM friendship. Read my story first to see whether of not you can stand reading the next chapters. If you do this for me I will, review of comment and heart your story.