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Alyss of Wonderland Suggestions & Feedback :)
Hi! I've recently posted a story titled 'Alyss of Wonderland' and would love any feedback. Also, I'd love any ideas for the remaining characters that I haven't mentioned/haven't fully plotted: ~Scarlet and Leon, the Hatter and Hare ~Maxius, the Duchess' chef ~Cheshire, the Cat ~William, the Chimney sweeper ~Petrus, the Gardener Please give suggestions! I'd love to hear your opinions. I am aware that only a few chapters are available as of now but your comments are greatly appreciated :)
by Reynn Tan | Aug 21st 2013, 07:53
I would love to read your story. I have to say I am not familiar with the characters to be much help but I'll let you know if I see anything that can be improved upon from a readers stand point :)
ReplyD.M. Gergen | August 21, 2013
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