Sparkatale

Like everyone else here... lookin' for people to look in on my story "Up a Tree." Can't really force you but please at least click on it and read a sentence or two!?! If you read the first few sentences and think "this is so stupid and not worth my time," please say so! Leave a quick word or two. Looking especially for comments on character development please. The plot, I admit, will be not far from cliche due to its satirical nature... but will take any criticism and suggestions. (I'm sure I have quite a few formatting issues). Thank you!