The Retold Tale of an Untold Story, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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The Retold Tale of an Untold Story

By: U l h u

Status: In Progress

Summary:

When Lydia's friend, Elbereth, is killed, she goes out looking for revenge. However, as she travels, she finds out that her friend was part of something big. And she had gotten herself in the middle of it.

Created: November 17, 2013 | Updated: May 7, 2014

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 0

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  • Dave Robertson

    Good so far. It's refreshing to read a story that doesn't contain a ton of grammatical errors. The story has promise, though a little more foreshadowing of what the story will be about would have drawn me in more. All in all, I think it's a solid start and look forward to more chapters.

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    November 21, 2013 Flag


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