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The Dawn of Ragnarok

By: Annabelle Pauldottir

Status: In Progress

Summary:

For four hundred years I have guarded these halls and its residents. Until today I had little interest in the souls. You see. Today the soul of Baldr entered my halls. The youngest son of Odin and Frigga. As foretold by the Norns, Baldr's arrival signals the freedom of myself and my family.Now as the sun sets upon the nine realms, all are blissfully unaware of the chaos and anarchy preparing to wage war. Come sunrise the peaceful illusion shall be shattered and the calm waters of time shall become rapids upon which the nine realms shall struggle for survival. For tomorrow Ragnarok is upon us. (All chapters revised and updated 2nd May)

Created: November 3, 2013 | Updated: May 2, 2014

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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1: Prologue 1068
2: Chapter One- The Lady of The Dead 2035
3: Chapter Two- Odinsons 1311
Total Wordcount: 4414

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      After reading the story description and the prologue, I think this is a really intriguing idea for a story. Obviously the author knows the Norse pantheon well and I'm interested in seeing where she takes this story. 

      I'd suggest only two improvements. One is to give us more description of the settings so we can feel like we're really in this world. My other advice to the author is to always remember that the reader may not be familiar with the norse world. You may need to tell us things that are obvious to you. 

      Nice job so far. I'm excited about the potential for this story.

      January 11, 2014 | Dave Robertson