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Innocent Suffering

By: Porscha Hall

Status: Completed

Summary:

A man named Opre has a unique view on people getting what they deserve. Even himself.

Created: October 1, 2013 | Updated: October 17, 2013

Genre : General

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 1

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Reviews (1)


  • D.M. Gergen

    Good writing, wonderful thoughts, and enough suspense to keep you reading through it. Hall has a great narrative voice that keeps even a heavy story with philosophy light in a very strange way, while creating a dark and heavy ending.

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    • Chapter: 1 Reply

      I would make that massive paragraph with the incident into two at the point where Opre is starts thinking about Xena.

      October 10, 2013 | D.M. Gergen