Sparkatale

Very nice. You managed to pull off that little trick of making your story seem longer than its word - count. This intelligence is reminiscent of BB from the the Kilo - Five trilogy, while also reminding me of Cortana from Halo 4, specifically the scene where she explains that she knows everything about the artificial sun they see, but unable to 'feel' it the way humans can. I'd be interested to see where this goes.

I really appreciate your wonderful comment. I'm still relatively new at trying my hand at short flash fiction, so it's a relief to hear that what I'm trying to accomplish with it is working on some level.