Status: In Progress
Summary:
A world where a teens would wake up with 1 card in there pocket or bed. Only people with a card can enter the school for these magical cards. A man named Thomas Greenfield woke up with a card on his bed. This is in the year 2563. There are schools all over the world that hold people with cards. 8 in Japan where Thomas goes to. And Thomas works for an organization full of strong magicians, it’s called Dragon Squad.
Created: April 11, 2015 | Updated: May 19, 2015
Genre : Supernatural
Language : English
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The introduction needs editing.
"It has an explanation mark on it." --what is an explanation mark? Is it related to an exclamation point? or possibly a question mark?
This card hasn't chosen yet. --If the card chooses who it will endorse, why does Thomas try to keep it? If thwarted, will the card just give in and accept the child in whose bed/pocket the card first manifested?
The society/background seems to need more thought.
October 7, 2015 | Lynn Hollander
