Status: Completed
Summary:
If you've ever travelled an underground railway system, this one is for you......especially if you commute on the Underground in London.......
Created: September 2, 2013 | Updated: September 2, 2013
Genre : Horror
Language : English
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A well written piece that really embodies the horrible claustrophobia I get in subways. A few minor editing things that stood out enough to slow the pacing of the story down at one point or another, but otherwise a very enjoyable quick read.
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September 2, 2013 Flag
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Again, very well written as your other pieces on here. A few minor editing things in terms of the spacing between paragraphs not being uniform throughout the piece and three paragraphs in a row starting with your characters name. Otherwise very well done.September 2, 2013 | D.M. Gergen