Life Intrusions, a Romance story | SparkaTale

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Life Intrusions

By: Breanna Wheeling

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Cole Rivers is the star of the football team at his high school. Everyone knows his name- he essentially rules the whole school. His life is turned upside down when a new boy arrives, James Crowley. He finds himself feeling emotions he never thought possible.

Created: February 13, 2015 | Updated: February 13, 2015

Genre : Romance

Language : English

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      Listen, I usually hate romance stories, but since I'm writing one, I thought, maybe they aren't as bad as I make them out to be. So here's what I'm gonna do, I told myself I would read the first romance story that I find of SaT. to see if the genre isn't as bad as i think it is. not to mention, if I read it, I'll be the first one to do so, so that'll be an accomplishment.

      February 13, 2015 | Michael Mann


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      I immediately fell in love with James. Now one small concern i have, Now I'm not homophobic or anything, but I'm kind of hoping that It's not Cole ends up with James, not only would that be a very bad match, considering Cole is a jock, and James seems to be a nerd (And nerds are awesome!) Not to mention Nerds and Jocks don't really mix. So I'm hoping that some female love interest happens down the road.

      I think this story is interesting so far, and I think I might actually end up enjoying reading it. I might end up reading it religiously.

      Maybe you might be interested in reading my romance novel. It's called Sky Night Lights. If you chose to read it, I would love some feedback.

      February 13, 2015 | Michael Mann


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      So it seems like some signs are pointing to a gaylationship. I'm fine with that as long as there aren't any gay sex scenes, or any sex scenes for that matter. I feel like sex ruins a good story.

      I find Cole to be very unlikable, at least right now.

      Even if this turns out to have them be gay, I'll still read it.

      February 13, 2015 | Michael Mann