Sparkatale

I wouldn't give an official review of the story so early into its existence. (But expect one once this story progresses) Having said that, I thoroughly enjoyed what I've seen so far. Your writing style is exemplary, very back and forth between He and She as they talk to each other. The chapters are very short, but somehow they seem much longer with the amount of detail you place in each of them. I found myself engrossed in each of them, slightly disappointed when they ended. I haven't come across many stories here that caught my attention in quite the same way. Please do keep it up!

Thank you very much for giving your thoughts about this. Yes, the chapters are very short, but I appreciate that you still liked it though and it makes me happy that you've noticed the detail in each of them. Actually I have to reread and edit this and reread again, because I usually get my pronouns wrong if I'm not careful. I've always liked to try to tell stories through parts, leaving the bits and pieces to make an entire picture. Thank you for your comment, because I'm convinced I've done a well job on it, at least. Chapter 6 actually marks the half of the whole story though (sorry for how this is so short). I'll definitely keep this up.

(This is actually inspired by my cousin and my ever wild imagination about the boy I tease with her though haahahhaa)