Status: Completed
Summary:
Created: February 5, 2015 | Updated: February 5, 2015
Genre : Horror
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
Favorites: 1
Reads: 901
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Reviews (1)
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This is a really good story, I felt genuine terror. It being short also helps with that. I hope you try some more horror stories, because this one was great.
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February 11, 2015 Flag
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You know what? I had been searching every page in SaT a horror narrative that can inspire my next story. I'm easily affected right now since I drank two energy drink and 2 coffee, just so I can feel fear, so I could write my next chapter.
Just arrange your paragraph, anyone will read this anyway. I'll comeback later and read this when I'm alone, in the dark.
June 24, 2015 | Hearm jan
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Isn't Micheal a boy name? It's just another way to spell Michael, maybe were you going for Michelle?
February 5, 2015 | Michael Mann
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Hahah Opps thanks for pointing that out I never really wrote that name a lot before I'll go back and fix it, But I hoped you liked it none the less. ^w^
February 5, 2015 | Zayo 69
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It's all good, It's a short story so i have no problem reading it, But I'll actually read it when I'm not as busy as I am now, I was just checking it out real quick because the picture and title intrigued me.
February 5, 2015 | Michael Mann
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Congratulations pal. You have officially scare me. Now I going to have troubles sleeping tonight. Thanks.
February 5, 2015 | QuickShot 1445
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Sorry Scott I just really like making books like this, glad it gave you a good scare, sorry you can't sleep tonight heh. OwO'
February 10, 2015 | Zayo 69