Sparkatale

I have to say this right now, I laughed quite a bit at your story from the very first chapter to the very last word. (And that's a good thing, and I'll explain why right now.) The story is just so fantastically, refreshingly bonkers that it completely took me by surprise, and I just kept reading to see what would happen next in an ordinary school day through the eyes of a tenth-grader. It was chaotic, like there were a lot of people trying to get their view in on the story. (An example would be the main character's conversation with her own brain... it reminded me of schizophrinia (A good thing, by the way.) ) If I didn't have a friend of mine who talks/acts precisely like some of your characters, I would have told you that they felt a little unrealistic, but they don't, and to your credit they kept in character through the entire work of yours so far. Everything just felt so...left-field that it's impossible to ignore, let alone stop reading. And then we have Naomi, and an intriguing sense of mystery thrown into the mix, just what precisely happened in the bleach room that day? I'm not even sure if you meant to write like this, or if this is how you type everything, but it's just so...unexpected and flat-out fun that I would like to see more!