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The Chimera Vector

By: Nathan Farrugia

Status: In Progress

Summary:

The Fifth Column: the world’s most powerful and secretive organization. They run our militaries. They run our governments. They run our terrorist cells. Recruited as a child, Sophia is a deniable operative for the Fifth Column. Like all operatives, Sophia’s DNA has been altered to augment her senses and her mind is splintered into programmed subsets. On a routine mission in Iran something goes catastrophically wrong. Bugs are beginning to appear in Sophia’s programming and the mission spins out of control. High-speed chases, gun fights, helicopter battles, immortal psychopaths, super soldiers and mutant abilities are all in the mix in this edge-of-your-seat action-packed techno-thriller. You can also read The Chimera Vector on Amazon, Apple, Google and other ebookstores. Visit http://nath.fr to read the whole series!

Created: September 14, 2014 | Updated: August 18, 2015

Genre : Science Fiction

Language : English

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1: Chapter 1: Not Quite As Planned 3416
2: Chapter 2: Exit Base Balad 3447
3: Chapter 3: Take the Bus 1727
4: Chapter 4: Forget the Scarf 2259
5: Chapter 5: Shocktroopers and Cupcakes 1891
6: Chapter 6: The Neopsyche 3015
7: Chapter 7: What's Your Superpower? 2431
8: Chapter 8: The Smart School 2534
9: Chapter 9: The Key 913
10: Chapter 10: Defekt 4396
11: Chapter 11: Crackerjack 3467
12: Chapter 12: Jellyfish 1242
13: Chapter 13: Bombka 2426
14: Chapter 14: Panélak 1633
15: Chapter 15: They Will Find You 1446
16: Chapter 16: Florence 1348
17: Chapter 17: Damien 2421
18: Chapter 18: Belize 3378
19: Chapter 19: Psychopath 3641
20: Chapter 20: Shocktroopers 328
21: Chapter 21: Nasira 2215
22: Chapter 22: The Spy 1512
23: Chapter 23: Grace 1629
24: Chapter 24: Lyon 1007
25: Chapter 25: My Aim Was Off 4922
26: Chapter 26: No Dice 717
27: Chapter 27: Hook Engaged 1691
28: Chapter 28: I Make Pretty Good Nachos 1673
29: Chapter 29: Superuser 2362
30: Chapter 30: Dragon Komarov 2827
31: Chapter 31: M&M's 3124
32: Chapter 32: The Vector Labs 2792
33: Chapter 33: Damien's Stopped Breathing 2086
34: Chapter 34: Countermeasures 1092
35: Chapter 35: We're Taking The Lab 3372
36: Chapter 36: Triple Agents 2572
37: Chapter 37: Definitely a Gemini 1480
38: Chapter 38: Reactor 1190
39: Chapter 39: Moron in Tin Foil 4027
40: Chapter 40: Get Inside 1103
41: Chapter 41: At the End of That Barrel 696
42: Chapter 42: Shoot 1142
43: Chapter 43: You Missed One 1858
44: Chapter 44: Heal That 1507
45: Chapter 45: Gabriel 1907
46: Chapter 46: I Want Answers 870
47: Chapter 47: Bunker Buster 983
48: Chapter 48: I Can Smell Blood 2451
49: Chapter 49: Don't Let Go 2306
50: Chapter 50: Manhattan 5051
51: Chapter 51: Where's Sophia? 1284
52: Chapter 52: The Black Death 1745
53: Chapter 53: Ever An Ill Death 1325
54: Chapter 54: Through the Gate 2985
55: Chapter 55: Dodge This 891
56: Chapter 56: Fireflies 1170
57: The Seraphim Sequence 215
Total Wordcount: 119138

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        I just glanced at this story from the homepage - it had so many views for a story which had not been commented on or 'favorited', so I decided to investigate. And was two-thirds impressed. To start with, I enjoy your writing style. Your opening to this chapter was one of the best I had seen for any novel, and you pile on the action thick and early - immediately in fact - so the reader is gripped from the beginning. You've clearly done a lot of research, both with the setting and with weaponry in general, and your characters already have personalities that can be developed and worked on throughout your work. Something I would hope to emulate one day. But. I found the constant repetition of the names of weapons incredibly tiring. In general, you can get away with announcing the type of weapon, and readers will understand that said character until he/she continues to use it until you write that they have changed it. Quite bluntly, and this opinion is subjective and easily debatable, it felt slightly like you payed more attention to said weaponry and ensuring that they sounded as realistic as possible rather than the story or plot itself. I felt it suffered a tiny tiny bit as a result. In terms of describing your characters, I honestly grow tired of writers describing their entire appearance in the first line, and I felt the same here. Not for every character you announced, admittedly - those that were dispatched are excused, because readers never see them again- but it would have been more effective to give readers small amounts of detail at a time - announce the color of their eyes in one paragraph, their clothing the next etc etc. You're not entirely guilty of this, but definitely some small but of work needed there. Finally, there was a typo I found within your story. ( Her head lolled. ) I assume you meant 'rolled' or some other substitute? I'm instantly assuming that it is the word 'lol' - popular with Internet speak- and if this is indeed an error I hope that it is not present within the kindle version of your novel. I'll try to read more of this - it's certainly better than some/all of my efforts and the plot and premise and writing style hold my interest, but there are tiny things you could work on. I'll give a review once I finish, your story has been viewed enough to warrant one at this point. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

        March 18, 2015 | Deleted User


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        I also apologize for the errors inside my previous comment.

        I was typing on my phone, hopefully it still came across as coherent.

        March 18, 2015 | Deleted User


      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        I'm no fan of sci - fi but I did look at this a little but I thought the Spongebob Squarents part was funny. So I had to laugh.

        June 4, 2015 | Allyson Andrews