Status: In Progress
Summary:
In a story of love and self-discovery, Bianca and her vibrant but crooked friends, Allie and Felix, undergo what many would consider the most befuddling strip of life: adolescence. Along the way, they find love (though often with the wrong person), learn that "you can't be a 'lost soul' without having been lost by someone in the first place," and ultimately save one another.
Created: July 17, 2014 | Updated: July 18, 2014
Genre : Romance
Language : English
Reviews: 3 | Rating:
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| 1: | Chapter One: Fall of Sophomore Year | 2111 |
| 2: | Chapter Two: Fall of Sophomore Year | 1423 |
| 3: | Chapter Three: Summer Before Freshman Year | 1669 |
| Total Wordcount: | 5203 |
Reviews (3)
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A really promising introduction to your novel, your writing style is fantastic and the characters already have such a believable depth to them. Felix feels like the most-developed character so far, and his anguish over his failing relationship was excellently-written and equally relatable! Please keep it up.
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all of the characters seem really real, and I can definitely relate to them. your writing is really smooth and mature and you are really good at developing characters. Felix is so sassy, I love it! anyway keep on writing! you're really good at it! :)
July 18, 2014 | darcy red