Status: Completed
Summary:
What actually happened. Sort of an anti-bible explaining the truth behind god and what truly happened in many historic events.
Created: August 16, 2013 | Updated: September 4, 2013
Genre : Humor
Language : English
Reviews: 2 | Rating:
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Reviews (2)
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This story started out as slightly humorous and light but took a nose dive when Hogan Hetelekisis started to talk about some really dark points in history, like the Second World War. For a short story narrated through the eyes of the being that created humans it not only felt a little flat, but felt really contrived. This would have probably done better with sticking to lighter topics like the bit with the dinosaurs or putting in a lot more detail than just skimming over things like WWII, 9/11, etc.
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August 27, 2013 Flag
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Interesting Anti-Bible talk. I'm agnostic, but have nothing against religion (That's a lie) and found your story very entertaining.
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August 23, 2013 Flag
